I like the idea of introducing a brewery/pub restaurant combination as the main program. You are encouraged to develop the site plan further, at present the plan appears to be flat without light and shadows picking up the geometry of the roofs, or highlighting the scale of the repurposed mill. Instead of showing the contours in the surrounding landscape, perhaps explore adding texture/lightly coloured transparent layers to enhance the nature of the landscape. Imagine what it would look like if it was an aerial drone shot?
Is there a kitchen layout for the G/F? How about the tanks and machinery that should be indicated on the 2F plan? The project will be more believable if further research was done on the spatial relationships of the equipment essential to a brewery. Make it believable!
Good start to the project, I look forward to seeing it being developed further.
Architectural Technologist with an interest in traditional and classical architecture.